Anyone want to help me w/ feedback on a project on Mormon history/doctrine/etc?

[jfro18]

I've been working over the last year on the site, but have been slowly putting different things together to eventually compile what a better summary for the page that will be something like CES Letter/Letter For My Wife but with some different focuses and of course will have some overlap.

If anyone is interested in reading the sections as I go please shoot me a PM - will send some links as I go since they're not published, but I'm trying to get feedback on the content itself along with the layout, length (covering everything but keeping it concise-ish), tone, etc.

Figure we can communicate that through PM as I'd rather not post it publicly until it's ready and that's probably going to be a while yet.

And there is of course no commitment - it's not as if you have to read each thing i send over... just as you can/want to. I'm aiming to have a group doing this with the expectation that only a few will have a chance at each time.

Thanks

[Palerider]

I'm in.

[deacon blues]

I'm down for it. It sounds interesting.

[Mankhoj]

I can't say I'm as wise or insightful as most on here but I'd be willing to give my 2 cents.

[jfro18]

Replied to the three of you - thanks so much!

If anyone else is interested shoot me a PM... no commitment of course and only do if you have time as I sent the sections over.

Hopefully this can turn into something helpful for people who are having issues if it can be done in a more "bulletproof" way from the cheap apologetics. We'll see, I guess.

[Random]

bump

[TestimonyLost2]

I don't know if I have a lot of time to help, but I edit other's writing for work a lot so I could probably be of help in that vein. Let me know if there's anything I can do.