If you're bored/interested: My First Vision section of a project I'm working on...
Posted: Wed Oct 02, 2019 5:25 pm
So I had posted earlier about doing this through PMs/email, but honestly who cares if people see a work in progress, right? And doing a bunch of separate PMs/emails is tough for me to keep track of, so away we go!
Anyway... I'm working on a project to do some basic summaries of each of the big topics and then have them on either a new site or on the current site as both a downloadable PDF and interactive/standard website page.
The idea is to be more up to date than the CES Letter/Letter For My Wife as well as getting rid of the areas that apologists hammer them on. This is *not* to compete with them because the CES Letter will always be *the* document, but just a way for me to put all my crap together and then be pretty much done with historical stuff.
If you're bored and want to read and comment, the First Vision section is up now @ https://www.ldsdiscussions.com/btf-firstvision
The things I am trying to focus on are:
1. Format - does it look easy to read and follow?
2. Tone - Is it as neutral as possible? Obviously it's from a critical point of view, but I'm trying to tone it down from the CES Letter and my other writings as much as I can.
3. Length - Is it too long? Is it too short?
4. Content - Are there areas where I am forgetting important info? Are some areas too short to understand or too long rambling?
5. Anything else that stands out to you - any areas where I might be wrong on conclusions/evidence?
Like I said, if you don't want to read this stuff anymore... don't worry. If you are interested, have a read and post here to let me know what you think. I have some others reading it elsewhere so this will give me a good idea of what works, what doesn't work, and if this is helpful as a summary of both the problems and apologetics without getting too deep in the weeds.
Thanks to anyone who reads through this stuff... if people are interested I'll post sections as I go which will hopefully be like once a week. Work is killing me lately though so we'll see how that works out.
Anyway... I'm working on a project to do some basic summaries of each of the big topics and then have them on either a new site or on the current site as both a downloadable PDF and interactive/standard website page.
The idea is to be more up to date than the CES Letter/Letter For My Wife as well as getting rid of the areas that apologists hammer them on. This is *not* to compete with them because the CES Letter will always be *the* document, but just a way for me to put all my crap together and then be pretty much done with historical stuff.
If you're bored and want to read and comment, the First Vision section is up now @ https://www.ldsdiscussions.com/btf-firstvision
The things I am trying to focus on are:
1. Format - does it look easy to read and follow?
2. Tone - Is it as neutral as possible? Obviously it's from a critical point of view, but I'm trying to tone it down from the CES Letter and my other writings as much as I can.
3. Length - Is it too long? Is it too short?
4. Content - Are there areas where I am forgetting important info? Are some areas too short to understand or too long rambling?
5. Anything else that stands out to you - any areas where I might be wrong on conclusions/evidence?
Like I said, if you don't want to read this stuff anymore... don't worry. If you are interested, have a read and post here to let me know what you think. I have some others reading it elsewhere so this will give me a good idea of what works, what doesn't work, and if this is helpful as a summary of both the problems and apologetics without getting too deep in the weeds.
Thanks to anyone who reads through this stuff... if people are interested I'll post sections as I go which will hopefully be like once a week. Work is killing me lately though so we'll see how that works out.